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Friday 31 March 2017

the tamaki games


Today room 7 was making games and this afternoon we were all playing our games to check if they were alright. when we had to switch my group went to joshua's and stanley's game and their game was called murder mystery candy land. their game was really cool to play.

WALT get information by understanding a video wednesday

Tuesday 28 March 2017

WALT use screencastify



Miss Ashley showed us how to download and use a chrome extension called screencastify. we will use this to record evidence of our learning.

Monday 27 March 2017

WALT mark our stories

Today room 7 was playing line basketball this afternoon. When the bell rang that was when we had to go out and play line basketball when no one was there. When we were playing room 8 came out with us and room7 had to vs room8.

When we went outside we had to go boy girl boy girl because the boys were talking and Miss Ashley had to split them up.  I could feel my sweat dripping down my face. I was really sweaty and tired i could go swimming right now.

When it was my turn i was running fast like a cheetah. When i had to go on and play i was  trying my best and i was cheering for my teammates and i was bursting in sweat. When other people were playing and i wasn’t on some people were cheating and they weren't playing fair. We all thought that we were all showing amazing teamwork.


When the whole game was finished the score was 4 out of 1 . when we had to shake room 8's hands some of them were slapping our hands because they were angry like a bull because they lost and we won.

we were humble winners and gracious losers.


Marking my story!
Ideas
Structure and Language
Organisation
Vocabulary
Sentence Structure
Spelling
Punctuation
R3
R3
R4
R4
R3
R3
R2
Total score (add the numbers next to the R’s altogether)
22
My E-asttle score is … (click here and see what your score is)
2P

Friday 24 March 2017

Wednesday 22 March 2017

Tuesday 21 March 2017

Friday 17 March 2017

Thursday 16 March 2017

The magic box

here is the recount i wrote on monday without editing




Today room7 blindfolded.we were playing a game and we had to guess what Miss Ashley put in her magic box.

This morning Miss Ashley was explaining how to play the activity. Miss Ashley brought food and objects with her magic box. She made a magic box by recycling out of a coke can box and she made a hole in the box so that we can feel the food or objects in the coke can box.

When it was my turn i had musterd and it was slimy and disgusting. It had  powerful smell and it was smooth and yellow.

When it was kordell’s turn he had a tea bag and when he squeezed it water came out and it was soft,smelly,squishy and it smelt like herbal.


I think it was really fun and cool because i got to


Did I remember to include….
Title
Introduction
Who, what, when, where, why, who, how
3 paragraphs - burger model
Conclusion - my own thinking/reflection
Specific adjectives
Simile/Metaphor
Different punctuation
Short sentence for effect
Correct spelling throughout the story
A sentence you have added in editing
A sentence you have moved in editing
Sentence starters given
Here is my edited story.


  • As I stood waiting, my heart was
  • I put my hand nervously into the box, and I felt
  • When Miss Ashley put the blindfold on, it felt like
  • The class giggled as
Today room7 blindfolded.we were playing a game and we had to guess what Miss Ashley put in her magic box.

This morning Miss Ashley was explaining how to play the activity. Miss Ashley brought food and objects with her magic box. She made a magic box by recycling out of a coke can box and she made a hole in the box so that we can feel the food or objects in the coke can box.

When it was my turn i had mustard and it was slimy and disgusting. It had a powerful smell and it was smooth and yellow. Miss Ashley tried to make me smell it but i didnt want to and when i put my hands in it i screamed ewwwww!!!!! . It felt like slime from a frog.


Today room7 blindfolded.we were playing a game and we had to guess what Miss Ashley put in her magic box.

This morning Miss Ashley was explaining how to play the activity. Miss Ashley brought food and objects with her magic box. She made a magic box by recycling out of a coke can box and she made a hole in the box so that we can feel the food or objects in the coke can box.

When it was my turn i had musterd and it was slimy and disgusting. It had  powerful smell and it was smooth and yellow.

When it was kordell’s turn he had a tea bag and when he squeezed it water came out and it was soft,smelly,squishy and it smelt like herbal and he guessed it straight away.

I think it was gross because my hand got covered in mustard and it was weird.

I hope that we can do it again because it was really fun.



Friday 10 March 2017

Reading recount

I think that we were reading fluently for the story and that we were reading fast. I think that we can read faster and changing their voices when we read and that we would read louder and that we would not stop when we are reading.

Thursday 9 March 2017

Table

WALT identify features of graphs.

Today room 7 was identifying features of graphs
  • the y scale in the bar graph always starts with 0.( Besides strip graph and pie chart)
  • Y axis  and X axis. Y axis is vertical and X axis is Horizontal.
  • Scale (Equal numbers).
  • Label the categories. For example the category could be My favourite color and The amount of students
  • Data (the information).
  •  Legend/Key. This color means that or this color means this. (Mostly recommended for Pie Chart).

Wednesday 8 March 2017

Game Review


WALT: I am learning to critically evaluate a game

Your name:

I played the game: cluedo
This game is made by the company: waddingtons
I played this game with: lydia,grace and suave


The purpose of this game is to (Hint: how do you win this game?):

My favourite thing about this game was: guessing who the murderer is what weapon they were using and in what room.

One thing I didn’t like about this game was: i like the game and there is nothing i don't like about it.

This game is good to play by yourself/with a friend/with a group because: a group because its better and plus you don't have to like play by yourself.



I would rate this game 10 out of 10 because: i really like the game.

If I could recommend something to make this game better, it would be: that there would be more clues and other stuff.

This game is better/worse/different from (the game you played last week) because: diffrent.




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ur review)

(Paste a picture of you playing this game or a picture of the game itself at the bottom here before submitting yo

Friday 3 March 2017